Feedback on Our Pitch.

The feedback we got was that the presentation was good and clear. We delivered the presentation with confidence and it was very detailed for our audience, we had a good knowledge of the genre. However, they thought it'd be a bit short for the 2 minute length we had been set, they also felt that the stalking needed more to it as it was a bit too simple. They gave us areas to improve on, they thought that people disappearing could work, so the girl goes to the door to answer or she goes to get something and she comes back to see that none of her friends are there anymore.